Thursday, February 9, 2017

Doing Nothing


L.I my learning intention was to describe doing nothing with better descriptive words


I had just finished swimming in our pool and was laying on my bed listening to my little siblings laughing and squealing like a pack of hyena I also listened to myself breathing and the wind howling but bringing a cool summer breeze with it.
I felt calm but also stressed about school. I listened to my dad getting angry at himself for work, Holly busy in the kitchen making dinner. And mila and jaecob playing without a care in the world.
So as my family carried on with their everyday lives I lay there feeling stiff from head to toe with a headache making me feel like my head was bound to explode! So to get rid of the pain I shut my eyes and dozed off to sleep.                      

8 comments:

  1. very discriptive and exiting

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  2. Awesome I like how you used so many descriptive words!!!!
    written by Hedi

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  3. interesting to reed well done!

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  4. interesting to reed well done!

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  5. Very descriptive indeed. I'd love to do 'nothing' just like you've described :-)

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