L.I my learning intention was to describe doing nothing with better descriptive words
I had just finished swimming in our pool and was laying on my bed listening to my little siblings laughing and squealing like a pack of hyena I also listened to myself breathing and the wind howling but bringing a cool summer breeze with it.
I had just finished swimming in our pool and was laying on my bed listening to my little siblings laughing and squealing like a pack of hyena I also listened to myself breathing and the wind howling but bringing a cool summer breeze with it.
I felt calm but also stressed about school. I listened to my dad getting angry at himself for work, Holly busy in the kitchen making dinner. And mila and jaecob playing without a care in the world.
So as my family carried on with their everyday lives I lay there feeling stiff from head to toe with a headache making me feel like my head was bound to explode! So to get rid of the pain I shut my eyes and dozed off to sleep.
very discriptive and exiting
ReplyDeleteAwesome I like how you used so many descriptive words!!!!
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interesting to reed well done!
ReplyDeleteinteresting to reed well done!
ReplyDeletegood job
ReplyDeleteVery descriptive indeed. I'd love to do 'nothing' just like you've described :-)
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ReplyDeletegood job
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