My Most Important peice Of Writing this week

My Most Important piece Of Writing this week was... THE SEA writing i did. I feel i used very descriptive words and also descriptive sentences.

look here to see THE SEA writing!
or go and scroll down on the blog to find it individually!
but just read it here its even more easy  

THE

       SEA

The sea was and still is an amazing place to me. It holds most of my joyful memories and is a place i feel i belong. I have visited the sea more than the number of tentacles on at least five octopus.

When we arrive at the beach a reassuring feeling runs down my spine. Even when i don't need reassuring. The feeling is like a peaceful voice telling me not to worry in the water for the sea is with me. I swim for hours and hours not even coming ashore to my mums call. Until… she pulls me out herself. And when the doors of the car close and the engine rev to life the reassuring feeling vanishes. Like it hadn't even been there before. And just like that i snap back feeling miserable to see the sea frowning at me as i drive off into the distance. Well until next time.

My most important part of learning this week.

My most important part of learning this week.



my most important part of learning this week was science. was not only fun but very interesting.
we did an experiment called black fire creatures. and all you needed to do this was a bowl (not plastic),
filled with sand and some lighter fuel squirted on the top. then we had to put some baking powder and sugar together. then pour it into the middle of the bowl on top of the sand. then we would light the fuel and watch as the sugar and baking powder would burn and grow in a way i don't  know how to explain.
               
                                                                BUT IT WAS COOL

THE SEA

THE

       SEA

The sea was and still is an amazing place to me. It holds most of my joyful memories and is a place i feel i belong. I have visited the sea more than the number of tentacles on at least five octopus.

When we arrive at the beach a reassuring feeling runs down my spine. Even when i don't need reassuring. The feeling is like a peaceful voice telling me not to worry in the water for the sea is with me. I swim for hours and hours not even coming ashore to my mums call. Until… she pulls me out herself. And when the doors of the car close and the engine rev to life the reassuring feeling vanishes. Like it hadn't even been there before. And just like that i snap back feeling miserable to see the sea frowning at me as i drive off into the distance. Well until next time.

Describing a raspberry cheesecake

Describing a raspberry cheesecake

What a boring day in a boring mall shopping for groceries until something very mysterious or should I say delicious caught my eye. And as I sneaked away from my dad my stomach started to growl but what was I so interested in you ask well I will gladly tell you. It was a not so boring raspberry cheesecake with chocolate carefully drizzled on the top. And all you need to know is that i nicely asked or as some people say bragged my dad to get it and so he did.

Oh my gosh that raspberry cheese cake is getting pounded in my mouth after dinner! And yes I think i'm going bonkers over that delicious creamy cheesecake . no Tyrell don't eat it. But you have to. OK now i'm going bonkers. OK just one more chip and I can eat that raspberry cheesecake. And… done wow that was a challenge but at least now i can NOM on that raspberry cheesecake. NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM. Blaaa! That was the worst raspberry cheesecake i have ever tasted what a rip off.