Rock climbing at camp

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Rock climbing at camp😄😃

Right there standing tall and proud in front of me was THE ROCK CLIMBING WALL.

It was a sunny wednesday at camp I could taste my salty dry lips which worried me. I could smell the faint smell that grass carried on a humoured windy day. But do you know what the downside to all of this was? Well it was that I had to wait in line and it sucked. But eventually my time to get hooked up to a harness came and i was off.

Wow its way taller from up close I thought. Well then I guess I will try this one first! I tried the 1st one in the row and got the worst time ever and guess what that was. Well i will tell you it was 25:00 sec

But really it didn't matter after that because when i was trying the last one in the row of rock climbing wall I got a high score of 14:00 sec. I was so proud of myself it was so fun I would have done it any day. But unfortunately everything comes to an end the same rule applies to the time we had to be on the rock climbing wall. And I bet you could guess what happened next. Because if you guessed that rubin our rock climbing instructor told us that our time was up! Then you are absolutely right and soon enough it was time for us to leave so we said or thanks and goodbyes to rubin and off we went to our next activity.

And while we were walking over I felt like I was about to faint because I was so Tired and my knees felt like jello my skin was irritated by the grass that I had sat and rolled and rolled in. and being a very humoured day did not help at all but being so tired in the day got me to sleep fast in the night. And luckily not get CHILL OUT AGAIN

Tyrell Bruce