Rock climbing at camp

     LI: to proof read my text to make sure i have spelt everything correctly and have correct punctuation.✔

     #2:to work through the whole writing process carefully so i don't miss anything.✔

#1=prewriting #2=Drafting #3=editing #4=proof reading #5=publishing.

    #3plan each paragraph so the details support and elaborate the main idea.✔

Rock climbing at camp😄😃

Right there standing tall and proud in front of me was THE ROCK CLIMBING WALL.

It was a sunny wednesday at camp I could taste my salty dry lips which worried me. I could smell the faint smell that grass carried on a humoured windy day. But do you know what the downside to all of this was? Well it was that I had to wait in line and it sucked. But eventually my time to get hooked up to a harness came and i was off.

Wow its way taller from up close I thought. Well then I guess I will try this one first! I tried the 1st one in the row and got the worst time ever and guess what that was. Well i will tell you it was 25:00 sec

But really it didn't matter after that because when i was trying the last one in the row of rock climbing wall I got a high score of 14:00 sec. I was so proud of myself it was so fun I would have done it any day. But unfortunately everything comes to an end the same rule applies to the time we had to be on the rock climbing wall. And I bet you could guess what happened next. Because if you guessed that rubin our rock climbing instructor told us that our time was up! Then you are absolutely right and soon enough it was time for us to leave so we said or thanks and goodbyes to rubin and off we went to our next activity.

And while we were walking over I felt like I was about to faint because I was so Tired and my knees felt like jello my skin was irritated by the grass that I had sat and rolled and rolled in. and being a very humoured day did not help at all but being so tired in the day got me to sleep fast in the night. And luckily not get CHILL OUT AGAIN

Tyrell Bruce

My Most Important peice Of Writing this week

My Most Important piece Of Writing this week was... THE SEA writing i did. I feel i used very descriptive words and also descriptive sentences.

look here to see THE SEA writing!
or go and scroll down on the blog to find it individually!
but just read it here its even more easy  

THE

       SEA

The sea was and still is an amazing place to me. It holds most of my joyful memories and is a place i feel i belong. I have visited the sea more than the number of tentacles on at least five octopus.

When we arrive at the beach a reassuring feeling runs down my spine. Even when i don't need reassuring. The feeling is like a peaceful voice telling me not to worry in the water for the sea is with me. I swim for hours and hours not even coming ashore to my mums call. Until… she pulls me out herself. And when the doors of the car close and the engine rev to life the reassuring feeling vanishes. Like it hadn't even been there before. And just like that i snap back feeling miserable to see the sea frowning at me as i drive off into the distance. Well until next time.

My most important part of learning this week.

My most important part of learning this week.



my most important part of learning this week was science. was not only fun but very interesting.
we did an experiment called black fire creatures. and all you needed to do this was a bowl (not plastic),
filled with sand and some lighter fuel squirted on the top. then we had to put some baking powder and sugar together. then pour it into the middle of the bowl on top of the sand. then we would light the fuel and watch as the sugar and baking powder would burn and grow in a way i don't  know how to explain.
               
                                                                BUT IT WAS COOL

THE SEA

THE

       SEA

The sea was and still is an amazing place to me. It holds most of my joyful memories and is a place i feel i belong. I have visited the sea more than the number of tentacles on at least five octopus.

When we arrive at the beach a reassuring feeling runs down my spine. Even when i don't need reassuring. The feeling is like a peaceful voice telling me not to worry in the water for the sea is with me. I swim for hours and hours not even coming ashore to my mums call. Until… she pulls me out herself. And when the doors of the car close and the engine rev to life the reassuring feeling vanishes. Like it hadn't even been there before. And just like that i snap back feeling miserable to see the sea frowning at me as i drive off into the distance. Well until next time.

Describing a raspberry cheesecake

Describing a raspberry cheesecake

What a boring day in a boring mall shopping for groceries until something very mysterious or should I say delicious caught my eye. And as I sneaked away from my dad my stomach started to growl but what was I so interested in you ask well I will gladly tell you. It was a not so boring raspberry cheesecake with chocolate carefully drizzled on the top. And all you need to know is that i nicely asked or as some people say bragged my dad to get it and so he did.

Oh my gosh that raspberry cheese cake is getting pounded in my mouth after dinner! And yes I think i'm going bonkers over that delicious creamy cheesecake . no Tyrell don't eat it. But you have to. OK now i'm going bonkers. OK just one more chip and I can eat that raspberry cheesecake. And… done wow that was a challenge but at least now i can NOM on that raspberry cheesecake. NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM. Blaaa! That was the worst raspberry cheesecake i have ever tasted what a rip off.

Doing Nothing

L.I my learning intention was to describe doing nothing with better descriptive words


I had just finished swimming in our pool and was laying on my bed listening to my little siblings laughing and squealing like a pack of hyena I also listened to myself breathing and the wind howling but bringing a cool summer breeze with it.

I felt calm but also stressed about school. I listened to my dad getting angry at himself for work, Holly busy in the kitchen making dinner. And mila and jaecob playing without a care in the world.

So as my family carried on with their everyday lives I lay there feeling stiff from head to toe with a headache making me feel like my head was bound to explode! So to get rid of the pain I shut my eyes and dozed off to sleep.                      

Wherenui making